http://rononeill.edublogs.org Another excellent Edublogs.org weblog Thu, 18 Dec 2008 16:22:50 -0500 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.8.2 hourly 1 http://rononeill.edublogs.org/2008/12/08/the-wheel-essay/comment-page-1/#comment-3 ritajeanstangherlin Thu, 18 Dec 2008 16:22:50 +0000 http://rononeill.edublogs.org/?p=6#comment-3 You have a strong sense of voice and your writing style is relaxed yet follows the formula. I totally enjoyed the ride you took me on for this prompt. Your instincts for conclusions and your flair with language show; your only "need to improve" is punctuation. Otherwise, perfect! You have a strong sense of voice and your writing style is relaxed yet follows the formula. I totally enjoyed the ride you took me on for this prompt. Your instincts for conclusions and your flair with language show; your only “need to improve” is punctuation. Otherwise, perfect!

]]> http://rononeill.edublogs.org/2008/10/28/lennon-remembers-by-jann-s-wenner/comment-page-1/#comment-2 ritajeanstangherlin Thu, 06 Nov 2008 15:22:45 +0000 http://rononeill.edublogs.org/?p=3#comment-2 Music is synced perfectly to images; like the slower musical start--effective employed. Opening slides superb; perfect use of text to image. Project meets and exceeds expectations. Fine job, Ron. LIked that you used Vimeo. Music is synced perfectly to images; like the slower musical start–effective employed. Opening slides superb; perfect use of text to image. Project meets and exceeds expectations. Fine job, Ron. LIked that you used Vimeo.

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